Amanda, I like that you're pushing the caricature a bit - please keep it up, if you feel comfortable doing so. While there are some proportional issues, the gesture is good. I like the mother pushing the carriage and the final page the best. The gestures have good weight shift - they could use some simplification and better lines of rhythm - but there is overlap and turning in the form. Avoid the line fills.
Amanda,
ReplyDeleteI like that you're pushing the caricature a bit - please keep it up, if you feel comfortable doing so. While there are some proportional issues, the gesture is good.
I like the mother pushing the carriage and the final page the best. The gestures have good weight shift - they could use some simplification and better lines of rhythm - but there is overlap and turning in the form.
Avoid the line fills.
The second-to-last drawing is a good pose juxtaposition, too. Think of how you can tilt the pose a little to enhance the overall gesture.
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