Amanda, A lot of these have some really strong points. While I'm delighted to see the great efforts you are putting into this course, try filtering through your drawings to show me your best efforts... perhaps 10 or so. The best efforts here have a strong silhouette, good turning in the form and a good line of rhythm. The pages where you have this, the subjects are definitely more elegant and the pose is more dynamic. Good work.
Amanda,
ReplyDeleteA lot of these have some really strong points. While I'm delighted to see the great efforts you are putting into this course, try filtering through your drawings to show me your best efforts... perhaps 10 or so.
The best efforts here have a strong silhouette, good turning in the form and a good line of rhythm. The pages where you have this, the subjects are definitely more elegant and the pose is more dynamic.
Good work.
I love the expressiveness of these!
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