Amanda, These look pretty good, overall. I like the poses you have chosen and your line development is the right approach. 2 things to say: 1. Avoid line fills. These have been overdeveloped and the shapes have now taken over. It is a standard practice with sketching that if a form gets confusing to read of too many lines get put in, the artist will start shading forms in. Please restrain yourself when you get this urge. I'm certain your work outside this class that is more finished is great - that's not what I'd like to see. 2. Stay conscious of form flexibility. In certain places, it's getting away from your (arms, legs). If you're going to keep withing a convention of drawing the human figure, stay consistent with the areas of flexibility.
That being said, there are some nice results here.
Amanda,
ReplyDeleteThese look pretty good, overall. I like the poses you have chosen and your line development is the right approach.
2 things to say:
1. Avoid line fills. These have been overdeveloped and the shapes have now taken over. It is a standard practice with sketching that if a form gets confusing to read of too many lines get put in, the artist will start shading forms in. Please restrain yourself when you get this urge. I'm certain your work outside this class that is more finished is great - that's not what I'd like to see.
2. Stay conscious of form flexibility. In certain places, it's getting away from your (arms, legs). If you're going to keep withing a convention of drawing the human figure, stay consistent with the areas of flexibility.
That being said, there are some nice results here.