Amanda, Overall, these are pretty good. The most dynamic poses in the upright player have really nice gesture. See how the hands lag behind the momentum of the arms? It's nice and fluid. Don't be afraid to amplify the gestures slightly more in the hips to emphasize weight transfer from one side to the other... and try to avoid shading in forms. Use line weight variety to emphasize limb overlap and weight shift.
Amanda,
ReplyDeleteOverall, these are pretty good. The most dynamic poses in the upright player have really nice gesture. See how the hands lag behind the momentum of the arms? It's nice and fluid. Don't be afraid to amplify the gestures slightly more in the hips to emphasize weight transfer from one side to the other... and try to avoid shading in forms. Use line weight variety to emphasize limb overlap and weight shift.