Amanda, Pages 2-4 have some really strong results - there's good variety of poses and of characters. Try to dial in some of your final lines - your loose approach really complements the poses and dynamic weight shifts - but don't forget to hone in on areas where a shorter, slower line is of better use (face, hands, feet). You can probably resolve any form or proportional issues by doing so.
I really like how your lines just flow.
ReplyDeleteThanks Lisa!
DeleteI like the expressions and characterasation of the figures. You capture them very well.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteAmanda,
ReplyDeletePages 2-4 have some really strong results - there's good variety of poses and of characters. Try to dial in some of your final lines - your loose approach really complements the poses and dynamic weight shifts - but don't forget to hone in on areas where a shorter, slower line is of better use (face, hands, feet). You can probably resolve any form or proportional issues by doing so.