Amanda, I like the way you are working here. The silhouettes are strong and the choice of poses are dynamic. Refer to Stanchfield's section on solid and flexible forms. While I like to see more fluid forms, the forearms are too rubbery looking and could use more taper to the wrist. Lastly, try to interpret the feet more as a form. Make more interior lines to help describe the toe shoe and straps, if necessary.
Amanda,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you are working here. The silhouettes are strong and the choice of poses are dynamic. Refer to Stanchfield's section on solid and flexible forms. While I like to see more fluid forms, the forearms are too rubbery looking and could use more taper to the wrist.
Lastly, try to interpret the feet more as a form. Make more interior lines to help describe the toe shoe and straps, if necessary.
I like how you can feel the movement of the subject in the movement of your lines.
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