Amanda, While I like the direction you're looking in these poses, they have a flat look to them - flatter than a lot of your better work. Try to take the time to get your forms blocked out and established a little more. The feet are reading a little odd as they recede in space.
However - walkers, bicycle riders - all good subjects. Turn the shoulders a little more off the hips, too. Get the subject turning their head a little more off center.
Amanda,
ReplyDeleteWhile I like the direction you're looking in these poses, they have a flat look to them - flatter than a lot of your better work. Try to take the time to get your forms blocked out and established a little more. The feet are reading a little odd as they recede in space.
However - walkers, bicycle riders - all good subjects. Turn the shoulders a little more off the hips, too. Get the subject turning their head a little more off center.