Amanda, I like the range of poses you a looking to draw. Please continue this. Your best drawings - the singer, the person stooping for the prop, and the seated and crouching figures with their legs crossed - all have decent weight shift and gesture. My one comment to assist you in making more convincing forms is to round off the cuffs, hems and collars of your subjects' clothing. Straighter lines tend to flatten the entire limb. Take advantage of line weight variety and the edge of your pencil, in addition to the line weight you have already established.
Amanda,
ReplyDeleteI like the range of poses you a looking to draw. Please continue this. Your best drawings - the singer, the person stooping for the prop, and the seated and crouching figures with their legs crossed - all have decent weight shift and gesture. My one comment to assist you in making more convincing forms is to round off the cuffs, hems and collars of your subjects' clothing. Straighter lines tend to flatten the entire limb. Take advantage of line weight variety and the edge of your pencil, in addition to the line weight you have already established.